How's this resume objective grab you? Now keep in mind it's original, true and should be geared to a few types of positions I'd be applying for. Thanks Objective: After three successful years of working seven days a week, two to three jobs, I am presently seeking a career opportunity with significant responsibility utilizing my qualifications, experience, skills and ambitions.

dry, and boring

You think it's boring compared to the generic ones that most people write? Damn :( I don't know what to say now.

Feedback: From your objective, I have no idea what your touted skills and qualifications are.

could you be more vague? also, no one care how many days per week you worked. you should leave that off.

tryin to show my hard work and dedication

better to show skills and results they want to know what they can use your for and what results you will produce for them you didn't actually name a specific skill that you have in your objective

Makes me think that you must be burned out.

Take off the first part and its all good

It's kinda vague in why you wanna work at that specific place. Aren't you supposed to cater objectives to the position you're applying for? Dress it up to say "I'm spifftacular and what this spifftacular position you're offering" without quite saying that. :P

what = want Sheesh. What the hell is wrong with me today?

Vague and totally pointless.